The shower was one place where she just couldn’t resist singing. Her melodious voice danced over the notes, with the flowing water keeping the rhythm. Her voice obeyed her every command, and the song itself seemed to bring life into the world. It was a wonderful way to start a wonderful evening.
All except…
“Would you cut out your singing and hurry up? You’re making both of us late!” screamed Anuradha from the other side of the door.
“Yeah, yeah, I’m almost done. Give me two more minutes,” said Samaira, while her reflection looked at her accusingly.
‘I should be an Entertainer. I’m supposed to charm people with my voice. Why doesn’t anyone get that?’
The evening was slowly turning into the night, and she was ready to take on the world. With the song still singing itself in her head and her heart, she walked to the Prakash Photo Studio. She needed some glamour shots for work, and Prakash (as it was fondly called in that locality) was the one place to get them from.
She spent an hour at Prakash. When the shots were done, she looked at them. The gentle hint of Kohl in her eyes, the black waves of her hair, the heart shaped face, they all told her that she was, indeed, beautiful.
‘I should be an Entertainer. I’m supposed to charm people with my beauty, with the ladylike grace that I possess. I wish someone else would see that for a change.’
On the street, she heard the sound of ghungrus coming from the local Dance School. She remembered how she used to go there as a child. The long hours she spent, dancing to the wonderful music. She remembered how wonderful and free she felt at that time, to move like she wanted to.
‘I should be an Entertainer. I’m supposed to charm people with my graceful movements, and the gentle taps of the ghungrus on my feet. I wish I could have that stage, once, where people would appreciate that in me.’
She reached her “Office”, her place of work, and met Greg. She didn’t know Greg’s real name, and he didn’t know hers. In the “Office”, she was Sam.
“Sam, your client’s waiting for you upstairs. He’s a Russian man, with big bucks, lots of it. Make sure you entertain him well tonight.”
She looked into the mirror, and the reflection spoke to her.
‘I am an Entertainer. I charm people with my body, and the things I do with it. In here, I’m Sam, and I fuck for a small fee.’
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a grim tone throughout.Liked the character dialogue bit.
Good read! \m/
DPhatsez
May 23, 2009 at 6:15 AMBeautiful story... wow!! and I liked Samaira's character... It has a tinge of Bittu (Dilli 6) in her character.. Loved it though...
Meow
May 23, 2009 at 10:45 AMDo I need to tell you that I loved it ?? ;)
Very well-written.
And again lovely choice of names. Right from the characters' to the photo studio's. :P
Cheers
bondgal_rulz
May 23, 2009 at 11:01 AMStumbled across your blog n I found it gripping and well crafted.
Keep at it (:
~B
Material Girl
May 23, 2009 at 11:17 AMWasn't prepared for the end . You gave the impression that she is a regular starry yed next door girl.
Fine change of gears towards the end :).
BrownPhantom
May 23, 2009 at 11:35 AMhmm. like u have fitted a big boss camera in my mind? Music I think, I write and you come again.. Food I think, I write. food there was..
whatever, Billy Joel's song I think "I am the entertainer..." I love the song.. And I love the story.. it is so beautifully expressed. wonderful .. really..
riddhiculous
May 23, 2009 at 11:50 AMIceMaiden
May 23, 2009 at 11:57 AMSo this is where my Samaira went. :) AMAZING read!!! seemed... so real. grim. and laugh-in-ur-face lik d way life is too. if tht even makes in any sense. :)
D last line was the best part. Said and Done. excellent end to d excellent story.
Keep up d writing, u knw wht shud be up next. :)
Cheers,
Annie.
P.S: Wow, Grey Shades writing is amazing aint it? :)
IceMaiden
May 23, 2009 at 11:59 AMuhh..um..its not really dark..but its the tone all over.. nice..keeps u waiting for the ending,..:)
Niti
May 23, 2009 at 12:11 PMvery much alike sonam kapoor's character in dilli 6....
very well written...love dit!!
Sakhi.
May 23, 2009 at 12:19 PMHmmmm....Nice punch in the end....
Espeiclaly that dialogue of hers.." I am an entertainer...." which kept on coming at intervals was nice....dude
I liked it very much..it was beautiful....
keep going...
Mahesh Sindbandge
May 23, 2009 at 12:24 PMLovely.. Listen, I am tired of saying Lovely, awesome, great, superb etc.. Give me adjectives before I run short.
What I loved was the narration, yet again. Whenever you plan to write a book, I am the first buyer.:)
Actually not, I should be getting it for free. Though, I've done nothing to deserve that, but being your biggest(only metaphorically and not literally ;)) fan, I think I should.
Netika Lumb
May 23, 2009 at 1:31 PMThe twister twists again...! Awesome dude, that was some entertainment till being entertained...! :P
Wow...! :)
Diya
May 23, 2009 at 1:44 PMHey Arnab, I made my first try at fiction, will you please go through that in my blog? I wish you to do that cz since itz just your cup of tea. Please,if you have time. :)
Diya
May 23, 2009 at 1:46 PMbondgal_rulz
May 23, 2009 at 2:30 PMyes this happens girls come up with some dreams and end up doing some other things:( this si life!!
Kunjal
May 23, 2009 at 2:47 PMYet another thought provoking post!Loved it.
Thousands of women are forced into this life as dark as night:(
She seems to be so innocent and full of life but that indded is just a mirage...No one hardly knows what she feels inside:(
Great work dear :)
Akanksha
May 23, 2009 at 3:20 PM@ DPhatsez... Thanks a lot man, and for dropping by.
Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:05 PM@ Sowmi... Hmm, that's interesting. Never intended her character to be anything similar to Bittu from Delhi6 though :D
Thanks for coming here again... cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:07 PM@ bondgal... :D You've already done that, haven't you??
Thanks a lot...
And another special thanks goes out to the special friends who helped me out with the names... the characters and the photo studio :P
Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:09 PM@ Newbie Mommy... Welcome to Technicolor Collage. Good to see you here :) Keep visiting, cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:09 PM@ BrownPhantom... Hmm... that was my intention with this story, good to see that it was a success! :D
Thanks for the comments... keep visiting, cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:12 PM@ riddhi... Hmm, I really hope it's a coincidence. Don't want you to predict what the next story's gonna be about :P Kiddin'
Hope you enjoy the other stories this much too... cheers, and keep blogging...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:17 PM@ Ice Maiden... Yup, that's where you Samaira went. Not feeling sad for her I hope...? :D
It made sense, somewhat. I won't say perfect sense, 'coz there's always gonna be some level of subjectivity about that now, wouldn't there?
Yeah, I know what should be up next. I'm working on it again, so it should be done...
Cheers...
And yes... Grey Shades is beautiful. Pun fully intended. :P
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:20 PM@ Niti... Glad to know that it's not really dark, didn't intend it to be that way actually somehow. :)
Thanks for dropping by, cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:22 PM@ Blue Eyed Soul... That has to be a coincidence. I never intended it to be similar to Bittu's character from Delhi6. I don't even know how that happened actually.. hehe
Nice to see you here. Hope your net is wrking now, so we can continue seeing you here. Cheers :)
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:25 PM@ Mahesh... Thanks man :) Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:26 PM@ Netika... I'm quite ok with you recycling em :)
I'll surely let you know when the book comes out, and you'll get a free copy... thik hai?? :P
Cheers.. and thanks :)
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:33 PM@ Diya... That's a nice nickname for me, "The Twister" :D hehehe... Thanks a lot
:)
Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:35 PM@ Diya... I'll surely go visit your blog and read it. Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:36 PM@ Bondgal... Thanks for pointing that out :)
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:36 PM@ Kunjal... I know. Life's weird sometimes...
Cheers, thanks for dropping by...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:37 PM@ akanksha... Thanks a lot. It's really sad how so many people want to do so many things in life, but are forced to end up doing things they don't want to...
Arnab Majumdar
May 23, 2009 at 6:38 PMwow mate... sadly beautiful... :)
Arv
May 23, 2009 at 8:21 PMPerfectly fine with me.. :)Rather, more than that ..
Netika Lumb
May 23, 2009 at 8:26 PMVery well written
Its true so many in Delhi do this...some for existence, some for greed
Pesto Sauce
May 23, 2009 at 10:16 PMThe 'twist in the tale' was too good... Very well written...
Anonymous
May 24, 2009 at 12:12 AMQuite interesting
Winnie the poohi
May 24, 2009 at 2:44 AM@ Arv... Thanks man... how's Minnesota? Enjoy out there dude... Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:35 AM@ Netika... :D
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:36 AM@ Pesto Sauce... Thanks a lot. I know it's very true, especially what you said about some doing it for existence, while the others doing it for greed...
Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:37 AMsimmmple yet so good!!!!!!!
dont ask my reason...
May 25, 2009 at 11:38 AM@ Kido... Thanks a lot. Go through the older stories, I think some of them have that twist that you'd enjoy :)
Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:41 AM@ Winnie the Poohi... Thanks :)
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:41 AM@ dont ask my reason.... Thanks man. Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:42 AMWow! I liked it very much. :)
Anonymous
May 25, 2009 at 2:22 PM@ Ki... Thanks a lot :)
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 2:30 PMarnab, amazingly wistful man. dark and beautiful. and sad. you have a way with words :)
Amritorupa Kanjilal
May 25, 2009 at 5:03 PMHard hitting! Keeps you waiting for more! Bring them on! :) Yes, truly the 'Entertainer'! Bravo! Words are Arnab's best friends! They listen to him so obediently and every word is meant to be where it is and nowhere else. Great! :)
And feels terribly good to be back here, among such amazing stories! :) Any plans of getting into writing books? :)
Tara
May 25, 2009 at 9:09 PMthis is really an amazing read..what a treat!
i loved the juxtaposition of the harsh realities of life and the desires of life within Sam...simply loved it
Phoenix
May 25, 2009 at 10:26 PM@ Little Girl Lost... Thanks a lot :) Glad you liked the story... keep blogging... cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:43 PM@ Tara... Hmm... I hope it delivers at the end, and doesn't just keep you hanging there... does it?
Thanks so much for the things you said. I really hope the words listen to me always - whatever they say, sometimes they really don't! :P
Welcome back here, I hope whatever kept you busy is over now... haven't thought of any book yet, maybe in future, someday... till then, Blog Sweet Blog :D
Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:45 PM@ Phoenix... :) Good to see that you liked it. Feels so good to have dedicated readers like you around :)
Cheers... and keep blogging. Take care...
Arnab Majumdar
May 25, 2009 at 11:46 PMLovely writing....This post made me reflect.
That's quite an achievement for such a short post.
Good writing.
wander over when blogosphere time permits ;)
-Cheers!
Veda
May 26, 2009 at 12:39 AM@ Mon Espace... Thanks a lot :)
I'll drop by your blog sometime soon... Cheers, and thanks for dropping by
Arnab Majumdar
May 26, 2009 at 11:12 AMNice. I did not expect this end. :)
Ire
May 26, 2009 at 3:52 PMAwww... Arnab... abhi main kya karun tera...??
Itna achcha kaisey likhta hain yaar... I am toh a big big fan of yours... I really wish I knew someone who cud publish your work.. U have immense talent..
Pata hain ki nahi??
Bow down to you...!!
Me
May 26, 2009 at 5:01 PM1 it spoke the feelings of so many women out thr.
very beautifully written arnab. khub bhalo hoyeche. :)
Preetilata【ツ】
May 26, 2009 at 9:03 PM@ Nikki... Makes me happy to know that :) Thanks a lot, keep reading... Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 26, 2009 at 10:39 PM@ Harshita... Arre, thanks so much for saying that yaar. You have no idea how great that sounds :) Keep reading the stuff that I write, that's like the biggest thing that keeps me going on with it.
Cheers, and thanks again. Take care...
Arnab Majumdar
May 26, 2009 at 10:42 PM@ Preetilata... Thanks a lot, bhalo laglo shune je tomaro bhalo legeche :) Keep reading, and writing... Cheers, take care...
Arnab Majumdar
May 26, 2009 at 10:42 PMoh. lovely writing there. kinda dark. but awesome work :D
*claps*
sorry for not dropping in regularly :-s been very busy :(
Mads
May 27, 2009 at 3:35 AMWow...Beautiful story indeed...Keep it goin :)
Tabitha
May 27, 2009 at 8:56 AMit's one of those stories that are short but eventually depict ideas worth a complete novel. brilliant work, arnab !
Saurabh
May 27, 2009 at 11:07 AM@ Mads... Thanks so much. You liked it in spite of the fact that it's dark, right...?
I hope you're back in the blogging scene now... it'd be fun to see something at your space. :)
Keep blogging... cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 27, 2009 at 11:54 AM@ Tabitha... Thanks a lot :) Have fun reading the blog, cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 27, 2009 at 11:55 AM@ Saurabh... Thanks a lot man. I hope I did justice to the ideas depicted here though.
Welcome to Technicolor Collage. Have fun reading... cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 27, 2009 at 11:59 AMerr...thought of trying my hand at writing. I'm really bad in the dialogue parts.
Thanks :)
PhilO♥
May 27, 2009 at 2:44 PM@ Cursed... and a damn good job you did at it too! :D
Keep writing... cheers...
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Collegegirl
May 27, 2009 at 6:39 PMnice one..
well written..
cheers :)
Amal Bose
May 27, 2009 at 8:05 PM@ Collegegirl... Welcome to Technicolor Collage. Thanks a lot for the comment, and your vote. Have fun reading the stuff on the blog... cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 27, 2009 at 9:38 PM@ Amal... Thanks a lot :) Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 27, 2009 at 9:40 PMsigh. wow. and hi.
Mystique
May 28, 2009 at 10:06 AM@ Mystique... Thanks. And hi :) Welcome to Technicolor Collage... keep reading, cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 28, 2009 at 11:08 AMTis sure is a beautiful "Technicolor Collage" out here !!
I read all your posts on this page.
Wonderful work !
Gonna be back for more.
:)
Cinderella
May 29, 2009 at 4:08 PM@ Cinderella... Thanks a ton :) Glad to know that you enjoyed the stories on the blog. Do come back and read the rest, and watch out for more stuff coming on out here too :P
Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
May 29, 2009 at 7:15 PM@ Jagjit... Thanks man.
Arnab Majumdar
June 5, 2009 at 3:03 AM@ Jagjit... Thanks man.
Arnab Majumdar
June 5, 2009 at 3:04 AMm eally amazed by your style !! superb !!
Anonymous
June 17, 2009 at 3:10 PM@ Pretty Me... Thanks a lot :) Hope you have fun reading the other things out here too... Cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
June 18, 2009 at 12:06 PM