The evening mist that hangs above
The turtle dove awaits his lady love
The twilight hour, a sweet regret
Another day gone, another day dead
The gnarled branches wave goodbye
The clouds, lost, in the deep blue sky
Bidding adieu to the shimmering lights
The Sun sleeps for the night…
What is 55 Fiction? It is a fiction story, with all the basic elements of a narrative (plot, characters, setting, conflict), in 55 words or less (A non-negotiable rule). I bent a few rules for this one, don’t really know if poems are considered to be a part of 55 Fiction or not, but it is less than 55 words, so here it is.
The picture used here was shot by Kshitij Sharma.
It's addictive, innit ??
I don't think it's considered as 55fiction. According to Wiki, it's 55Poetry. :P
Whatever it might be, it's real nice. :)
And great pic by Kshitij.
bondgal_rulz
February 2, 2009 at 2:57 AM@ bondal.. it is VERY addictive!
And by the way, did you really check on Wiki about 55 fiction? They have an article about that???
It was the picture that inspired this poem...
Arnab Majumdar
February 2, 2009 at 10:51 PMnice one yaar.....was gonna say the same thing...thats its a poem.....nice.....
Anonymous
February 2, 2009 at 11:45 PMThanks dude... and yes, it is more of 55 poetry than 55 fiction, but then again... what's in a name??
Arnab Majumdar
February 3, 2009 at 1:42 PMbeautifully written!! :)
Pri
February 26, 2009 at 11:03 AM@ Pri... Thank You...
Arnab Majumdar
February 26, 2009 at 11:45 AM