The two sisters fought bitterly. The elder sister was leaving that night, and the siblings weren't talking to each other.
They knew they would miss each other very much, but would never accept it.
Just moments before the final goodbye, the younger sister said something adorable. "Didi, tu mujhko apne dahej mein lekar jayegi na?"
What is 55 Fiction? It is a fiction story, with all the basic elements of a narrative (plot, characters, setting, conflict), in 55 words or less (A non-negotiable rule). I haven't written something along this line for some time now, so this one might come across as slightly rusty.
I am the 1st one again! And u inspired to me to do a 55 fivtion now!
Good one!
Unknown
February 14, 2009 at 1:44 AM@ akanksha...So this is how it feels to be inspirational... :D
55 Fictions are great fun to write, I love the challenge of putting everything in that tiny word limit of 55 words.
Have fun writing, cheers...
Arnab Majumdar
February 14, 2009 at 1:50 AMmy god .. now I feel like taking up this challange and writing something in 55 words !
good work ! and thnx for adding my blog to your list
Tall Girl in Japan
February 14, 2009 at 4:28 PM@ Ruch... Thanks for the comment, and I've found through my own experience that 55 Fiction is fun, and it's very addictive once you start off with it!
Arnab Majumdar
February 14, 2009 at 4:38 PMProbabaly, I will try....
anyways nice write up..
Pallav
February 14, 2009 at 8:44 PM@ Pallav... Thanks... and all I can say is, it's addictive!
Arnab Majumdar
February 14, 2009 at 11:53 PMsome time addiction is good for health
Not always.... Mind it!!!!
ha h ahaaa....
Pallav
February 16, 2009 at 10:19 AM:) Short and sweet
Me
February 16, 2009 at 5:07 PM@ Pallav... You're right, a small level of addiction is good, but then again it's the large levels that starts creating problems. Although out here, it really shouldn't be that much of a problem.
@ Harshita... Thanks...
Arnab Majumdar
February 17, 2009 at 6:13 PMHey Arnab! Nice template :)
55 fiction is nice, but even I don't know whether it includes poems. And unlike you, I am pretty miserable in writing stories.
Keep posting in this 55 fiction series, simply love them :)
Rajtilak Bhattacharjee
February 19, 2009 at 10:44 AM@ Rajtilak... Thanks. I don't know whether 55 fiction includes poems or not, but honestly, with me, what it's called doesn't really matter all that much with me... hehe. I try to keep writing in the 55 fiction series, even I'm quite fond of it, but then there are times when I feel like writing something that contains a few more words... hence the other posts in the other categories :D
Arnab Majumdar
February 19, 2009 at 6:20 PMnice concept !:)
good one yaar ..
am chking ur blog 4 the 1st time .. u have a nice one
M
February 19, 2009 at 11:17 PMYeah.. vil have to start ticklin my imagination powers :-)
Anonymous
February 19, 2009 at 11:48 PMthat brought a smile on my face...nice!
Anonymous
February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM@ Meenu... Thanks for dropping by, even I enjoy writing stuff in this concept. It's great fun, the challenge that comes with restricting yourself to 55 words!
@ Ankita... Really glad that the blog posts are having that effect on people who read it :) Thanks
@ Anupriya... That's a proof of success, right? :) Thanks for reading...
Arnab Majumdar
February 20, 2009 at 1:05 AMThat last line hit hard. Very hard. Period.
Peace.
Kartz
February 22, 2009 at 3:18 AM@ Kartz... good to see that the last line lived up to the expectations I had from it.. hehe... thanks for reading, and commenting...
Arnab Majumdar
February 22, 2009 at 11:52 PM